Oh wow..that was amazing! It was so beautifully written, the descriptions were amazing. It was..just..there are no words. Amazing job!! Really! Great job.

Oh my gosh, I have this lovely image in my head that I really want to go draw now.(Although he looks remarkably similar to Yue for Cardcaptor Sakura in my mind. Forgive the anime geek, please.) Hence my next compliment of your use of imagery. I think it was more sad than horrific, but it was still written very well. Keep it up!!

Oh that was so sweet and poetic. And kinda sad *sniffle*

That's a beautiful little story. I didn't actually find the ending sad at all. A very good piece of work.

Lovely job! Very descriptive and easy to follow. I love the flowing of the words.

Wow. We mean this is... Like Sister White said, wow. This was really good. Quite beautifully done. We like the last two lines the best though. Sad, but wonderful at the same time. As Sister White also said, why is this in horror? We mean, it is talking about death, but... *shrugs* Oh well.

If you do anything else like this please inform us.

Thanks!

~The Asylum Escapees~

Wow...that was just wow. Very beautiful. Why you put this under horror? ;o) I mean it has a good flow in the story. nothing horrific about death when you put it in such a manner in your story. ;o) It's good...keep me posted if there be more!