I loved that

O_O Wow. I can totally relate to that. That is like, well...that is me!

Cool title too.

Wow. Good job, you have written a poem about how I feel, which I have never quite accomplished. You must be good!

Great job! Keep it up!

Searcher of Souls

I liked it. I think you have talent. Just, one thing I noticed you randomly capitalized. I think that might have been because it lost the orignal format and got mushed together though. I hate it when that happens. It was nice to see a happy ending. I'd like to thank you for all the reviews. I appreciate them. As for your question I've had a difficult life. It never gets better. I'm going to read some more of your work.

*Plutostar*

Ditto with Heart of the Sword. Very moving!

CoolBEans18s

cool poem! very nice imagery. a bit sad at the start, but still nice. keep writing

This was moving. You have a good way to get your sediment across.

Heart of the Sword