oh my god that was so emotional and touching... so well written, i didn't expect that ending at all!

You made me mad. But I like being mad, it makes everything so much clearer. Don't you agree? It was beautiful. Have you ever noticed how when ever someone is talking about something they've read it's always in the past tense. Like once they finish reading the characters die. If that's true then all the characters die and... Wow. I'm rambling. But it is 2 am. I'll stop now.
Morissa

...i liked reading this, a little whistful,dark, but beautiful in its own way. i couldn't stop reading it. i think i love this fic.

wow...that was seriously amazing. the emotions and truth you put into it were spectacular. this was grand, good job! i cant even say enough about it. it was so dark and sad and stuff. wow

~color outside the lines~

wow... this is really good and very scary. good job~~!!

It's a good story, but I think the problem is that the summary is *so* well crafted - making the reader think it's a woman talking till the very last part - that nothing can live up to it!