hehe, kinda funny, this one. my sister has a story almost just like it, hope you check it out when you get the time. http://fictionpress.com/~paranoiaserf - it's the one entitled "oh captain, my captain". i really strongly recommend! :)

very nice characterization. A fitting look into the popular crowd… and I find Matthew's character rather intriguing… isn't he a sort of goody-two shoes guy? A "swearing" goody-two shoes? Woah! I really need to read more so you have to upload soon, ne ^_^

Wow! I really like this story! Being a teenager myself, teenage stories always interest me, and I think this one is pretty good. You have a good sense of humor. It fits in the best spots, and it's not stupid humor. Keep it going!

i'm getting a little excited over here. they'll totally fall in love and get married, etc...i can't wait.

update asap

Good writing

sounds like a good start..keep it up !

good job, I think this story could be one of the more realistic and interesting on the site, kudos!!

sounds like me in high school!

That was a really good insight into popular people. It was very interesting. Are you going to write more to this story, or was that just it? If you are going to write more, pleez update soon!