I love it! It's very clever.

Sarah

Interesting use of imagery with the 'words would come spilling out my mouth like water'. The use of the work 'broken' on two separate lines I thought was clever as well. Very sweet and well written.

Maa, a new one! *pounces on poem* ^_^ Welcome back! We've missed you! And what a nice poem, too. Keep on writin, MJ! *waves frantically*

splendid...yes i know this feeling! bubbling over with something, but words dont do it justice! wonderful poem, especially the b-ro-ke-n - lines bit, very clever and apposite. well done!

wow, yey, new stuff, and I love this poem. Great job, I loved the "broken" part about it. Hope to see more soon. Keep it up ^^

Yay! New post! 'Bout time, too. Lol!
I think this is pretty good. I got a little confused at the word "broken" (But I'm a little slow, so, ya, ^.^", lol). When I finally got it I was like "Oh wow! That is so cool!" Hehehe. Very nice touch with the "Joy to the World" play on words. Gives it a nice personal flare, I think.
I've missed ya since you've been gone. (That sounds like a song lyric from something. Hm...?) Anywho, I hope to hear from ya more often (i.e. posts ^.^).
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-