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| newfoundhope 2005-05-16 ch 1,   | sniff. so sad. did he really die? |
| Jesse the Storyteller 2005-02-27 ch 1, | I think you meant to say "of" instead of "off"... aye. I love the beginning. The ending is sad, but der. He died. Death is sad. |
| Cecile Johnson 2004-03-31 ch 1, | OMG! I love this poem! It's so touching...I'm going to show it to my bf tonite (6 month anniversary!) It's perfect! You're brilliant! |
| Sky 2004-03-27 ch 1, | This is such a sweet poem. I've read some of your other work as well, and I think you are a very gifted writer. Please keep up with your work. |
| jason 2004-03-22 ch 1, | :O that poems so nice, i duno how u can just keep writing em so easily, miss ya heaps luv ya... (thatd be the only way i'd wanna die :)) |
| aiur 2004-02-15 ch 1, | ouch. the emotion in that one hit hard. to have him die in your arms ... ai ... but you wrote it very sweetly with a lot of emotion ... love the repetition of "he's my angel" ... *sniff* ~k8 |
| Jinxie 2003-10-29 ch 1, | You are a very talented Poet and writer. Wish I could write poetry like you do. |
| jma 2003-05-04 ch 1, | on the contrary, fair Jules, i must say that your poem "Angel" was rather sweet-and sad...gave me a little twing in my heart... ever the writer, jma |
| raineblade-ace 2003-05-02 ch 1, | That is so sad. Did he really die? Your images of comfort is really powerful. It seems as if there are rarely any guys who are willing to comfort a girl. Or maybe it's just that I've been hanging around a lot of jerks. |
| SilenceInsideForever 2003-04-26 ch 1, | I love the free-style. It keeps the poem flowing without any rhyming. I love the message too, very powerfully expressed. Poetry is sure a good way to express how you're feeling, eh? :) |