Sweet story! This girl has guts and skill, it sounds like. Please, do continue and let's hear what she does now. I hope she finds her father or something so that she can have some kind of happiness. Does she go by her real name in Manorya or has she changed it?

Very interesting! Great chapter, please update soon!

Yay, another great chapter! I like your chappie titles :P

I like the way you wrote it in a journal type of way. Now I am intrigued...More coming soon?

Great story!! I hope you continue soon! It was very interesting to read, I can't wait for you to update!

Great beginning! I can't wait for the next chapter!