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| Rose 2004-05-01 ch 7,  | As soon as I started reading this book that you are wrighting. I found myself lost with in this world that you have made with just words. I hope that you keep on wrighting and that I see more of your work. For this world should seehow in truth.That the younger pople to have dreams. An that is proven with in your work!! |
| crysofinx 2003-11-09 ch 6,  | please hurry up with the next chapter. i'm a devoted fan and i want to know what happends next, so hurry up and update. Thanks:):):):):):):):):):):):) |
| Bud 2003-11-01 ch 6, | Hey I thought it was really good. Being as I haven't read in a while I hoped there would be more than 1 new chapter. Let me know when you finish the next. I also think that you ended precisly where it was needed. |
| Tamaku Songi 2003-10-28 ch 6, | This is cool. cant wait for more |
| SexKitten6922 2003-10-16 ch 6, | faith, baby girl i love your story. it definately needs to be updated soon. i hope to se more soon! i need you to check out some of my new poems and stuff. ttyl babe. love, samantha |
| Jess 2003-09-05 ch 4, | absolutely amazing. seriously |
| Indravyn 2003-08-08 ch 1, | This is really interesting. I would be the female version of fire. I want to be the exact female model of him. I have mor fire in me than any other element. So yeah. I love the song. |
| wolffie 2003-08-05 ch 5, | if i ever sleep over your house i'm amking sure i wake up FIRST |
| Bud 2003-08-03 ch 5, | well i like it aside from what you and stan talked about i found almost nothing wrong with it perhaps you could be a little more desciptive while talking about what they are wearing. but all in all its great but a little slow. |
| TromBonerBoy 2003-08-03 ch 5, | +5 points for this story... but waking somebody up via showerhead is evil ;)... other than that... i liked this chapter btw-we have to hang out after you get back... |
| Froggie 2003-08-03 ch 5, | THis is a nice light hearted chapter. Just like Shakeseapeare, a little break, pure genius faith. Great dialouge. Update soon!! I can't wait until our wedding, see you in Vermont :) |
| TheSonOfGod 2003-07-19 ch 4, | Hi lovely. Ive finally... FINALLY! read your story. It's really great, I'm being honest here. And if I am not mistaken and well...haha. I never am wrong ~smiles~, back to the point of this sentence, your character Morrigan reminds me of someone. And if I remember correctly didn't you threaten Raven with a jelly packet the night before you went to Canada and also the night before you wrote this?~? You've really captured Morrigan well. She does remind me alot of you. Strong, witty and annoying when she wants to be! All you need now is the irish accent, which by the way is coming along very well ~claps~ I have to go pick you up now. Love you Panther. `~`Jesus`~` |
| Kell Hound 2003-07-15 ch 4, | what no decition for wolfie? T_T heh heh just kidding. great job can't wait to read some more. |
| Bud 2003-07-14 ch 1, | I love it! Its great so far, the only critisism is that you should use a thesaurus for the word muscular. But yah this is awesome |
| Cody 2003-06-30 ch 1, | Hey Faith! This was really awesome. The only thing I'd change would be that in some places u change from present tense to past tense and back again, just might want to check on that. other that that, it was great! |