|Reviews for Feathers|
| teh tarik 6/14/04 . chapter 1
Just found this in the spotlight poem area. I love the calmness in the last line. And the smoothness of the hwole haiku. Beautiful work, really.
| Chains 1/14/04 . chapter 1
I loved it. I really think it's a beautiful work. I'm lucky i found it among all the others! ; )
| greenzzz 9/14/03 . chapter 1
| content with rhyme 7/18/03 . chapter 1
This is great, absolutely fantastic. I couldn't have said it better myself. :o)
| Twisted Illusion 7/3/03 . chapter 1
oh wow, very good. really paints a picture (as my English teacher would say) in the readers mind, hehe.
| Lounalune 7/2/03 . chapter 1
Really beautiful imagery.
| Angelic Wings 6/27/03 . chapter 1
I am speechless. ABSOLUTELY SPEECHLESS.
| Leodel V. Del Fuego 6/11/03 . chapter 1
Well, dreams can't come true unless you're going to work for it.
| Gone23123 5/28/03 . chapter 1
Beautiful and dreamy
| Janne Doe 4/30/03 . chapter 1
Wow... and you dare to call my pieces good? I am shadowed by your greatness...
| kamikaze899 4/29/03 . chapter 1
and this makes twenty! i loved it!
| Lyria Shard 4/29/03 . chapter 1
Beautiful, but isnt there one too many syllables in the last line?
| Princess Mulan 4/28/03 . chapter 1
this is so beautiful ans so spiritual
only someone with a soul like yours can write something so sweet and lovely.
you're the best!
| Emerald Starlight 4/28/03 . chapter 1
| ChaoxAngel 4/27/03 . chapter 1