Omg! That was beautiful. I love every single minute of it. T_T...and the way it ended - I never, ever expected that. I loved how you built up the emotion and just let it all go. Your feelings were superb and so was your descriptions - O! Loved it! I teared up a bit - so that's something to pat yourself on the back for.

And you picked the perfect song of Gackts! I never thought anyone would do anything with Gackt on fictionpress - I was so,so,so,so happy! I'm pretty obsessed with him, if you haven't already figured out from my pen name. Heheh. And his lyrics were so beautiful! Of course I expected that from him - They were so painful! Well I expected that too. He had such a terrible life - I read his autobiography so I can definitely understand where this is all coming from. If you ever have time, read my one-shot Watered Words. That's something I wrote to "Last Song" - It's not exactly like this. It's more just listening to the song and typing what I felt. Free verse really.

That was just so... so... so...
beautiful!
ok two words :VERY BEAUTIFUL!
actually three words:extremely extremely BEAUTIFUL!
lol.I like the way you potrayed the feelings of the guy.
'Maybe I should stop running, and smile too …'
man,that was good!=D
once more:beautifully written.^^

OMG...I love this song..hell I love Gackt...okay I don't love Gackt...I ADORE him...i think you put tthese lyrics to justice
**goes off to stare at a piccy of Gack in his Cyberland outfit and the cool snake pants**

it's me sp again! hi. i like this one, it's very nice, and a bit sad. that singer is very talented, his songs seem nice. good job!

*tears well up*

WAH~ poor guy...I feel so bad for him...
x_x I'm NEVER gonna listen to Missing and feel the same again. *sighs*

well-written and very smooth. ^^

"Maybe I should stop running, and smile too …"

I like the qwuote! *^^* and this writing style differs a little from the usual, but it's wonderful! Use this writing style more often! =^^=