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| Niki Lemonade 2007-04-17 ch 1,   | I completely understand what you're saying here. I love to drift off in my own mind while everyone around me is being annoying. Loads of fun there! ~Lemons |
| Inkypink 2007-01-30 ch 1, | That's how I feel a lot of the time. "I in my mind was roaming free. When ceaseless chattering On trivial things, Bothered me. I turned it off." That's what I do, too! And that's why half the time I end up staring vaguely into space, completely out of it :) I completely identify with this! lol! |
| ChristinaStar 2003-07-15 ch 1, | I totally relate to this poem! You definately captured the feeling of emptyness and the effects it has on the mind. I have alwyas tried to sort that out and I have never been able to format my words to some level of comprehension. You did it very well and I really like this poem! Keep it up! |
| Moonstar 2003-06-25 ch 1, | I'm a silent sort of person too. I have random outbursts of loud hyperness, but that's about it. I know what it's like to roam free in a crowd too. The human mind is such a vast place, you can't see it all in one day. I hope you don't think I'm totally insane now. If you do, just know that you are not alone in your opinions. ;) |
| Lazerponies 2003-04-27 ch 1, | Very nice, I think it conveys the concept well and ads a touch of emotion to give it power. Good work, keep writing. (: |