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| Genato 2007-07-01 ch 26,  | abusethis is really good. a bit too cliche, a bit too mushy but still good. the plot is original at the start but it turned cliche. its still great though. :) |
| Potatoe1988 2007-06-22 ch 27, | abuseHey there. I read most of your story last night, but had to go to bed before finishing the last few chapters because it was 6am and for some reason I hate being awake at dawn. I have no idea why. Anyway, I really liked it! And since I was reading it like, right before I went to bed Daze was in my dream. Not that he looked anything like the actual character. He was blonde and had way more of a build than I would imagine Daze having, plus there were four people in his band instead of three. In fact the only thing that was consistant with the character was that he had a lip ring. But I knew it was him, because it was my dream. So anywho, I really liked the unique plot. It was definately something different. I think I might check out some of your other stuff sometime, including Pitch Black. |
| AJS 2006-12-31 ch 24, | abuseI love the idea for this fic, although i wish that the connection could have stayed with them as well :( I get how the they know what each other is thinking even without it thing can be romantic as well but still... :x Ah. I just realized that there's a sequel to this fic as well but honestly, I'm not going to read it because I think I just like how things are left right now, right here. Even though some things still aren't wrapped up yet like Dazelix still doesn't know about their family's history together or whatever, I guess that just gets cleared up with time, I don't know. It doesn't really matter, I guess. I guess I'd like to know WHY everything happened though. Like WHY were they connected and WHY it stopped. I guess we all know that it stopped because they both figured it out but... why not just continue it? Why does it even matter? And since they have the same birthday... then I guess that's why they're connected. haha anyways, I like this story a lot. You laid out the chemistry between them pretty nicely :) Keep up the good work! And one last time, I really love this storyline and the idea of telepathy :) -- Alyssa |
| ebonydragon 2006-08-30 ch 14, | abuseOH MY GOD! I LOVVE Relient K! They are by far my favorite band in the wide wide world! They are the only CD's that I have the originals to. I LOVE RELIENT K! O.K, breathe...This is a great story and its wonderful, and its interesting, and I LOVE IT! |
| ebonydragon 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abuseWow! This is really good! |
| dawn's unforgiving darkness 2006-08-28 ch 24, | abuse*sigh*that was lovely i love all the bands they listen to |
| dawn's unforgiving darkness 2006-08-28 ch 16, | abusehis mother is ** up and sickhow could she do that and why would he let her that is so sicki would feel so tainted and dirty |
| atreyu love 2006-08-16 ch 24, | abuseoi, SWEET :D |
| atreyu love 2006-08-16 ch 22, | abuseO_O Zee uncle |
| atreyu love 2006-08-16 ch 21, | abuse:D I LOVE THE STORY! |
| atreyu love 2006-08-16 ch 20, | abuseoi, i dont really like his mom :( |
| atreyu love 2006-08-16 ch 19, | abuse:D now i like SR-71 |
| atreyu love 2006-08-16 ch 18, | abusehmm.. maybe krissy and reeze? |
| atreyu love 2006-08-16 ch 17, | abuse*GASP* *clicks arrow for next chapter!!* yay!! |
| atreyu love 2006-08-16 ch 16, | abuseO_O his own mom?? *gasp* |