Reviews for That Nature Yet Remembers

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Hereward the White 2004-11-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseFrithrah! I am both a fan of Watership Down and a fan of Gulliver's Travels; your poem here has an air that reminds me of gulliver at the end of Part four in the book! It's how you are able to hold deep conversations with rabbits and refer to yourself as one of them. Next thing you know you'll be telling me that there's no Lapine word for 'lie'.
Evil-Frolicing-Angel 2003-10-17 ch 1,	abuseNothing much to say but... FROLIC! FROLIC! FROLIC!
Spector'sGirl 2003-08-22 ch 1,	abuseWow! I'd never even thought of what life for a rabbit might be like, because as you might have guessed from the many references in my poetry I identify more with preadatory animals. "And fox's breath - the stench of death" was such a perfect description for that feeling.
Namir Swiftpaw 2003-08-21 ch 1,	abuseI love it! I have always wanted to write a poem about my were side, but I don't think I could ever put it into words as lovely as this. You are a brilliant writer! Don't ever stop! ~Namir Swiftpaw
Animagess 2003-06-07 ch 1,	abuseHas potential, but the rhyme scheme condemns it to the status of "cute". What's a 'Hiawatha'?, anyway?
Magdalen 2003-06-06 ch 1,	abuseusually i do not like rhyming, so i feel that the way you've applied it is very remarkable and fitting, wonderful in fact, i am in awe...i love your poem and give all encouragement.
Special K Birmingham 2003-05-31 ch 1,	abuseWow, what a break from reading rhyming poetry where the rhymes are so forced. They just seem to come naturally, and there is nothing here I can dispute as being the wrong word, which I tend to do. Keri P.s. I guess biology is useful, because I actually understood what a phenotype is and have seen it used in context. Isn't that marvellous?
Dark Angel The Temptress 2003-05-24 ch 1,	abusethis is an amzing poem! i love the rhyme scheme, it flows very nicely. great work!
RainShadow2005 2003-05-08 ch 1,	abuseTo look at this poem I'd never think that it's an older one. It seems to have all the same wisdom and passion as your other fur posts. It's very inspiring that you have this connectedness and that it's so enduring. Great image about how you wish you had a rabbit phenotype but that you really have a human phenotype. Yeah, you're right...what's written in your genes (genotype for you readers who don't know) and what shows outwardly (phenotype) is not always the same. We actually just exchanged a few emails over just that... ;-) This was a well done poem.
Once in a blue moon 2003-05-06 ch 1,	abuseVery nifty! Old poems are somethimes the best - and this certianly is an example of it. You found a less obvious way of rhyming than, for example: bunny and sunny, or something equally boring never showed up. Good job!
Cherub of the Gutter 2003-05-02 ch 1,	abuseThe rhyme scheme on this was very good!! You also expressed some interesting opinions that I haven't heard before. All in all, very enlightening. Have you read WATERSHIP DOWN, by Richard Adams?
Lavender Lucy 2003-04-30 ch 1,	abuseWow! Great poem! I usually find it hard to make my own poems rhyme. I think you've done such a great job, making this poem so deep, poetic and even rhyme.
Belle the Shadow-Cat 2003-04-30 ch 1,	abuseI probably should have reviewed sooner, oh well. A very nice poem, and a nice rhyming scheme. I could definatly catch some of the Watership down references. I still have yet to check out your FF.net, but i shall get to them. Belle
VladimirsAngel 2003-04-30 ch 1,	abuseVery nice. Loved the rhyme scheme.This line in particular: "No longer paws nor needle claws...But human hands instead" I know that feeling. Oh aside and I'm sorry I said bunnies were cute. I've known a fair amount of rabbits in my time that have done just the thing you describe - attempting, usually, to disembowel my arm - and you gain a healthy respect for the little guys after that sort of experience ^_^
Keep it 100 2003-04-29 ch 1,	abuseAwesome. This was really original and great. ~Heart of the Sword

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