I love how its realistic, some parts have me in giggle fits and others have me ooh-ing and aww-ing.The characters have such personalitys and make me care for them, its all over a good read.

Ah, this story is so GOOD. It makes me sad that it hasn't been updated since 03. With a gap that big, there's not much hope for an update--but I'll put it on alert in case.

I love how realistic this is. Great job.

Grand story.
I really hope you feel inclined to continue it.

Oh God - why would you stop writing this? Have you seriously not updated it since 2003 or is fictionpress just being weird? I'm deeply frustrated that there is no more to read. Damn you in the best-meaning way.
Zeb

This story is awesome. The idea alone is very original, but the way you pull it of, the style, is brilliant as well. Yep, this is definitel going to my favs. *nods* Update soon! :D

When will you return to update I like this story and where it's going.

I love everything I've read so far ^_^ It really hooked me. You've set up the characters of Bren and Parley so well, I'm really attached to them now ^^' Nice work, awesome writing

I like it. Especially the touch of mystery you've managed to add... Not entirely saying everything that's going on, while saying everything important that's going on. The characters have become pretty real (besides Freak, who's still a mystery). I hope you manage to continue it someday.

Oh this story is awesome. The characterization is perfect, as is the originality. I always like trying to give some kind of constructive critism but the only think I can think of is 'why oh why haven't you finished this yet?' Keep up the good work :)

~poke~ write more. heh, i like this story. you should keep working on it. although i'm one to talk, i haven't updated in a while, although for me that's two weeks, but still... i like this stroy, it's all complex and deep, and i wanna know what happens next.

i like it i love it i want some more of it! ^^ UPDATE SOON!

You need to finish this. Please. Please please please. It's driving me insane.

It's been over a year, I know, and maybe you're not on this site anymore. But if you are? Please. It's so amazingly well-written, with a look at 'pyromania' from the scary, out of control viewpoint of the victim of the disease. And darnit! I don't care so much about Oliver, or the slash plotpoints, or whatnot, I just want more.

Begging.

Raises alot of questions and it almost seems more cautionary or guidal than realistic. Fairy-tale ish, but in a way that's designed to help people become better people or something.

>.< (Glare of DOOM TM) UPDATE! PLease?