I think the wife was a B*. At least she could have said why she was leaving. I like the poem though and whatever you think, its not half bad. I am not just being nice. I don't review what I don't like... Heck! Half the time I don't finish reading what I don't like! I like this though!

Skye

That's so sad...aw. The rhyming seems forced at times. And it should be bear, not bare.

Good poem. Very nice job. *applause*

*SableTrumpetress

It gave me goosebumps in the end! Nice writing- keep it up :)

Good, good! Keep writing!

Interesting concept... Would've been even better if the reader never found out what happened with the wife and all. Could've just been a little spot of needless paranoia. Hm...

oopps... I though I reviewed it when it just came out.. oops... srry ice_wolf

Well... it's a great poem, I love it... although I would rearange a couple of things...

Btw... update... Griffon's Decision

Hey! I really like this poem! It's great! I can't wait to read anything else you've written. You're a very talented writer, and I hope you continue to write in the future.

Yours Truly,

Mystress Tate