Beautiful.

Actually, this poem is a good example of why I've always had a slight (only slight) irritation with the spelling "magick". It just looks artificial - in the second line, "magical" would look *far* better, as spelling it that way would fit much better with "mythical" (unless you want to spell *that* as "mythickal"!)

Right, trivial moan out of the way, we can turn to the poem itself. Anything to do with creatures within is going to interest me (I'm a fur, you see), and I like the way you've gone about this poem. Maybe some of the scansion needs a little work, but there's nothing too bad, and the first line is superb.