well written and very interesting.

oh my GOD. this is... beautiful. i'm sorry. SO empathic, raw, real, hopeless, helpless, cathartic & the last line... i would sleep with that last line.

i believe

the best way to do THIS would

be for all of us to beat the hell out

of one another so we would not be

sequestered beneath pianowire grins

OH my GAWD! I swear, the band looped our graduation song, you know, da-dadadum-da-da-da-dadadum-da-da
I would've killed someone if they didn't all sit down wherever they were at coz goddmnit I never wanna hear that frickin sht one more time!
sigh, and don't even try to tell me about the morons who spoke...geh
needless to say, I fucking hated fucking graduation.

wow. this is powerful. sort of sad,

Bittersweet

certainly, and is that a hint of

Premature Nostalgia

I see hidden between the words?

(I love the imagery)

"at least the grass would

be trampled underfoot."

[wibbles]

EG

This is good. Nothing else to say.