I like the unconventional rhythm here. It sounds like a much more interesting version of my own "Moth". Great job, sis.

You're more talented than you will admit, very good. Well done if I do say so myself. You get nothing from praise eh?

That poem descibes me perfectly. Excellently written.

this is well-written. it reminds me of a line i've put into one of my poems. sry, i can't rememeber it right now.(stupid memory ;) ah, well...back to the review-yeah, i just really like how it's expressed. u did a very good job! it's something almost everyone can relate to. except the one thing i can't is growing up in all "sorrow, pain, and depression" yet, don't get me wrong, i've had plenty of that in my life, especially this year...anyways keep writting!