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jabba 2005-11-16 . chapter 1
Hey Randi, this is very cute.

I liked it, and in a way reminds me of my brother and I. We would suddenly just return to that place when we were kids and tease and bicker with each other.

Jabba
Ms Urania 2003-04-29 . chapter 1
Beautiful work! I really like how you began the story by deceiving us with the suspense and then showed the real realationship between them. I especially love the ending-very sweet.
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