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siopilos
2005-11-01
ch 1,
how sad that the persona sincerely wanted to change but couldn't. but at least he did something that others may not have done... he had a realization. sometimes life for us isn't to understand but to realize why things happen the way they do.
restless-wandering
2003-05-08
ch 1,
hm... ponderous... I like it :) i think... ack, don't ask, the voices in my head are arguing again and I can't hear my thoughts. hahahaha!

*vanishes into the black brewing clouds*
LonetravelerintheDark
2003-05-03
ch 1,
this is definately an extremely powerful poem...probably the best i have ever read. this is not only beautiful but extremely powerful. it really makes you stop and think. this is truly magnificent. please keep on writing.and thanks for the review
~Never willing to cave into others' for there is no need for the eternal darkness takes care of all...Kanya~
RNL
2003-04-29
ch 1,
One word for this - WOW.

RNL
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