 OverCastDay 2003-05-03 . chapter 1 Finally! I've been perusing fictionpress.net for a few hours now, searching for a well written story and now I've found it. Your prose is elegant and frankly, I would have been happy just to find a story without a misspelled word. I feel so lucky to have found this gem!
The second to last paragraph was the most beautiful part of this story, IMHO. A perfect ending to a great story. You put the concept of what a ghost is into a whole new light. Bravo! |