It does have a ring. I love it. Perfect because it says so much in so little- I admire people that can do that.
*puts you on author alert*
-Jessica

I like this alot. along with all your writing. I wish I had half your writing talent. your poems rhyming scheme is something I have never seen befor but it works out perfectly anyway. good job on all your work.

ps. I know exactly what you mean in this poem. your writing speaks to me.

I'm a fan of short sentenced poems myself... So what can I say but * * *G R E A T * *

I can relate to this so much, it is as if you read my mind. Completely and totally amazing.

I really do hate leaving short reviews, and I am sure you hate ones that have no purpose, as most likely this one.

Thank you for reviewing my stuff when it does not even hold a candle to yours.


Krikoris

It is actually pretty cool; what with the emphasis given by the short, staccato sentences. Except for the errors; it really is good.

I actually liked this alot. I liked the way you used short sentances to emphasize the anger in this.

The shortness of each line creates an amazing intensity and sharpness that enhances the meaning. It very powerfully expresses the point, it’s an amazing poem. I especially love the lines "Crush me
For growing up
Drown me
For standing tall"
Very good poem, very well expressed. It seems a sad and angry poem, but such is life and thus it adds well to the realism of the piece. (: Always keep writing

Hey... I can really relate to this just now... *sigh* I just have to keep reminding myself that they don't know that they're doing it!
Love it. Really expresses what I've been feeling lately, and undoubtedly what you were feeling when you wrote it. Beautiful.

m~* Sunflower, anyone?

I'm imagining this is to people in general. People who try to beat us down because we don't fit into their mold. But, a lot of it makes me think of words to a parent or parents. Like -
Push me for becoming you
and
Crush me for growing up
Anyway.. I really like the rhythm to this poem. I liked the strong message given in a lyrical way.

i love it and thank you very much for the review. this is how i felt when i tried to fit in but then i said screw it, no one should dictate me good job man

nice poem..shows a lot of power and strong emotion...i've somewhat felt the same..keep writing...!

sad ... I like ... errie feeling, but I'm already kindda hyped so it didn't make me all goosebumpy. cool though ... yeah, everyone hurt people for being themselves. life hurts. "Life's not fair and then you die", as my mom says.

~Dark Ink
Don't take life seriously.

Short and simple. Very nice.

Whoa. Cool, I love it. I can really relate to it, a lot of people can. I think that it speaks a huge truth that too many people are too blinded to see.

very well expressed. i like this alot! good job ;) very powerful!