 Natalie Portman 2003-07-10 . chapter 1 they= the germans... |
 IcyDevil27 2003-07-07 . chapter 1Awesome! This is deep stuff! Were you referring to anything particular... I mean is the ambiguous 'they' a certain group? |
 Kusakabe Maron 2003-06-06 . chapter 1Great poem! My last name is Schindler in real life. ^_^ |
 Mina Carlisle 2003-05-16 . chapter 1I like it and it flows well. Nice. But you sound a bit harsh at the end of it though. |
 Chaos In Neverland 2003-04-30 . chapter 1 Oh, 'tis good. I LOVE that last line. |
 ChaoxAngel 2003-04-29 . chapter 1You have a very good sense of artistic expression in the poems you write. Schindler is a great man. =]
~DW |
 SeverusSnape1 2003-04-29 . chapter 1Interesting. Shindler was a great man. Nice poem, though |
 Mishapen Adonis 2003-04-29 . chapter 1I liked this very much and concur. Though i think some of your changed tenses were intentional, there are a few "will"s that should be "am"s as well as a couple of other incosistent tense issues. With the exception of techincal issues, it was a lovely poem. |
 Indigo Williams 2003-04-29 . chapter 1I think that is a wonderful poem. Keep up the writing. I added you to my favorite author's list. |