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| Kaida 2003-09-07 ch 1,  | You know, I was just thinking(and freaking out) about all that last night...and they say the idea of Neverland is for little kids. I'd like to stay like this forever, and know that my parents will always be around etc etc. But we can't, can we? We just keep going and going and going and going... btw Kirika-chan, good poem. You have very good use of words, like my sis. Will go read your story now... Kaida |
| crazybunniesinmyhead 2003-07-07 ch 1,  | Another good poem. I like how you write about what a lot of people wish. If only time would slow down for the little things in life. But oh well, we might as well enjoy life for what it is. |
| Jace1 2003-06-03 ch 1, | i enjoyed reading all the different thoughts u had pointed out in this poem.. about how fast life goes. good job jace |