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Reviews For: Living Dead
Dante's Disciple 2007-04-02 . chapter 1
Wow, now I feel awful :(
Seriously though your use of metaphorical imagery here is very good, I like how true to life you capture the workings of the mind.
Great work.
karkuoor 2003-07-22 . chapter 1
that was interesting.
i liked the ananlogies.
it makes u think not only about depression but about life itself.
its deep.
someone 2003-05-18 . chapter 1
powerful. very powerful. great choice in words. you described it well. which makes me wonder if you've gone through it. but thats not my business. great piece
sathepine 2003-05-11 . chapter 1
Nice piece! Nice piece! Great work! Great work! Haunting... =)
teh tarik 2003-04-29 . chapter 1
Kinda creepy...

So you make depression sound like some Lady in Black and something like a living death. Really good words, and you describe everything so clearly; the feeling, the horror and everything else. Nice!
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