 Dante's Disciple 2007-04-02 . chapter 1Wow, now I feel awful :(
Seriously though your use of metaphorical imagery here is very good, I like how true to life you capture the workings of the mind.
Great work. |
 karkuoor 2003-07-22 . chapter 1 that was interesting.
i liked the ananlogies.
it makes u think not only about depression but about life itself.
its deep. |
 someone 2003-05-18 . chapter 1 powerful. very powerful. great choice in words. you described it well. which makes me wonder if you've gone through it. but thats not my business. great piece |
 sathepine 2003-05-11 . chapter 1Nice piece! Nice piece! Great work! Great work! Haunting... =) |
 teh tarik 2003-04-29 . chapter 1Kinda creepy...
So you make depression sound like some Lady in Black and something like a living death. Really good words, and you describe everything so clearly; the feeling, the horror and everything else. Nice! |