I really liked this, for some unknown reason. Not saying it wasn't good, or anything. Just saying that I don't usually read poems like this, but it was really really good!

wow i really like all the stuff you've got up... some of its pretty random... but of course, where would we all be without the random people... i really like the rhyme scheme... its very simple and direct... nice flow... thanks for the review and sorry i didnt write you one... WRITE ON!

It's me! Again! Yet another well written poem by you. I have to admit I was a bit apprehensive to read this bit but I'm glad I did. You never cease to amaze.

~KayWest

Wow. Struck close to home. Felt like this when someone went away to boarding school...

Another great poem. I love you system you used for last word ryme and next sencence. Creative as always...

i like the structure, strangely enough. the poem did seem totally random. it was very enjoyable to read, nice work

This is really good and it's true that it gets you mad when someone doesn't love you too.

I like the way the title goes with the line structure, I didn't realize it until I read the thing at the bottom and I think that's really cool.

~Shelila~

oh interesting...again

and can i add that i laughed involuntarily when i saw the words "** you"

Certainly sounds very depressing though... Great job!

I love it!

Very creative, both in title and word-sequence. The rhyming works very well, and you've got the message across at the same time!

I'm impressed!

^_^ this is a great poem. I love the title it's really interesting! And the poem is very htoughtful and well written. Well done.

This was really well written, it reminded me of a broken friendship I had with someone... but I just couldn't stand her, and she just couldn't stand me. I think that the way that it worked out was all right... Why am I rambling about myself? Sorry about that. I just wanted to say, it is really easy to relate to and wonderful. Thanks for writing and posting.
~*~Kiayla~*~

interesting, lmao, the lil ending there made me laugh for some reason, but the whole poem is great *with a good title, lmao, i cant come up with titles for *** and how you managed to get it to rhyme is beyond me, but excellent poem, very well written and different

The title was unique(I thought it was cool how you named it), and the rhyming was good, but I think the poem itself is very typical.

AH uve made me speachless for the third time. THAT IS QUITE AN ACHIEVMENT I MUST TELL YOU. congradulations, youve done what no one has done before, no matter how much they wished id shutup.