Very interesting. You write very nicely without rhyming. (Did that sound like a compliment? I think it was supposed to be. You can ignore me if you want.)

nicely done. i like it. check me out, if you can.

There's only one word for this - *Wow*

Aurora Barrett

PS I like the imagery... This explains what no other author has ever before attempted to explain... I love it.. Keep up the good work!

i like it. read and review mine