Of everything of yours I've read, this is one of my favorites... the last two lines close it very nicely.

this is lovely! it should be a song. it sounds like one.

ah! it's so amazingly wunderful good that i'm becoming incoherent! aldrjbgaekga;iudroithweknjbdvkaeurhtalkrg! translation: whoa.

i like the shakespeare-esque-ity of it. again, i'm mad at you! (well, not really.) you lied and said your writing was bad. well, it's not, it's precisely the opposite. so hah.

-jd

p.s. you think that *i'm* eloquent? think again! look at this review. i mean, what kind of work is shakespeare-esque-ity? huh?

very wierd.

i like wierd.

i especially like the norse mythology sprinkles on top:)