awesome poem! it reminds me of a friend of mine

yet another aspect of how im feeling!so good i may have read it before...maybe im just crazy

i know exactly how u feel about this situation, i hope u can compromise w/ur friend and be happy

This is excellent...I'm impressed by your ability when considering your age...no offense

Ouch. Much bitterness here, but something with which I can honestly understand. BBut nicely written, not OTT at all. I like this piece

Alex