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| Choleric Mist 2005-01-01 ch 1,  | abuseSweet, beautiful and completely relaxing. Definetely does not suck. |
| Seattlezak 2003-05-01 ch 1, anon. | abusePrety neat. Intresting assignment. Didn't suck. Overall pretty cool! |
| kamikaze899 2003-04-30 ch 1, | abusehey! that's nice! keep writing... ^^ |
| hoellenwauwau 2003-04-30 ch 1, | abuseGreat one, loved the last line! cio, hoellenwauwau |
| Someone Out There Cares 2003-04-30 ch 1, | abusethat was excellent, even considering the fact that u don't play guitar. I fu didn't write that I would assume u played the guitar. But then again, itz never good to assume |
| Heather Montgomery 2003-04-30 ch 1, | abuseYou really can't say that you suck at poems, because this one is obviously beautiful. And here I thought I was the only one who wanted to call my guitar Silver. Well, Silver Fire. That is, when I get a silver guitar. Anyway, I'm rambling now. I really like this poem, it's short but incredibly sweet. Very good job! |