I like this poem. I knida sounds like something I would write...lol, your a good poet. keep it up. um, what can i say. the emotion is there and the flow is good...the only thing its "missing" is a rhyming scheme, but it dosnt really need one. I liek this poem as is. good job.

I've been there...

Nicely done for me i could almost picture every line and i love that when a poet can do that keep up the GREAT work
P.S~I've got some new poems up *wink*wink*

AW! that was sad but really good. I liked. Heh... I get like that sometimes. when music inspires my writing. gweat job... :'(

~Sandra~

HOLA~

That was so sad! T'm gonna cry. In the proverbial words of Justin Dewey, "I think you need a hug!" I wish i was as talented as you are, Maria. That was just as good as the R rated one if not better. ;)