I really liked this; it was very moving. I think it's amazing that you wrote this in Japanese...Jeez, I reall ysuck at Japanese...perhaps I should stick to European languages for now...but anyway, I digress. I think you're very talented, and I'm glad you use your talent rather than let it sit and rot away...^^; Good work!

~Stormy

Poetry which is delicately truthful is difficult to find; poetry with those atributes written in an authors second language is even rarer. That was a beautiful poem, in both english and japanese, and I hope that beautiful spirit of yours never dies.

-Rushifa

Ah!! That was so good! I really liked it!

If you have time, could you maybe check out some of my songs/poetry? ^^

TS

That is a really lovely poem. I love how there is a lot of meaning and truth behind this. I wish the poetry that i have written on here sould have as much feeling as your's. Good job i hope to see more.

IIdesu ne! I'm learning Japanese right now, but I don't know a lot of Kanji. Luckily for me, I know a bit of Chinese, so I was able to stab and guess at some of the lines. Yay. It'd be nice if you could leave some pronunciation guides next time, too!

Sugoi!! I can't read Japanese though but the translation is awesome! I just wish someone who teach me japanese. Sigh.