so i am sittin in tha basement
and i read your story
and i think
to my self
...what a wounderful world
(umm are reviews supposed to be negative? i hope not cause i am enjoying this)
the lover

i just finished reading all of it, but i accidentally pressed review for chapter 1...anyways, it was a good story, and i liked how you coordinated the verses while narrating. i, too, like john mayer, and i find the style of writing inspiring...it gives me ideas for other songs. keep up the good work b/c you obviously have the talent! ^__^

That had some great imagery...and was really good. I just have to ask though - why was the table sticky?

that was nice, so that song just inspiried you to right that huh? interesting.

Yes, surprisingly, that WAS long enough for me. Good job. I now like that song even more. Which is something I'm not entirely sure is possible. But I didn't know all the lyrics before. Heh. I still sang with it, mind you, I just didn't know what I was singing.

I think you have written one of the only song fics that I've ever felt was warrented. Seriously. Some of them manage to pull it off without damaging the song, but most would have done better without the song, in my opinion. This one was nice. Good job.

i like it, no real comments

Stealing peoples shirts is fun...

Anyways - this story could go on for awhile, Luke seems like a good character, write more! *pokes*

I dont like John Mayer much, but i like your story! La di da.

Two thumbs up :)

Funny how thing DO resolve themselves sometimes. Hope this one does for you, too.

well, interestingly enough, i downloaded that song a while ago, when i was downloading random john mayer stuff, but since then i have only listened to "Your Body is a Wonderland" and "No Such Thing"

now im listening to "City Love"

really good - i like him already!!

u have to update soon!

It's interesting.

Please, continue.

I like it! And I like John Mayer, too. Anything he's written. Anything you've written. Heh.