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| Suki-chan13 2007-09-08 ch 21,  | abuseooh i liked it...it was really awesome...your a really good playwright...keep up the awesome work! |
| Aivalee33 2007-05-24 ch 21, | abuseI must say I really love this story. The format you wrote it in was a little strange to me but I liked it all the same. |
| Upset Nerve 2006-02-26 ch 21, | abusei loved it. it's really good and show's how society is definately one-tracked mind people. i really enjoyed it. keep up the good work. lol! |
| strawberry-toast 2005-11-26 ch 21, | abuseyay, happing ending. so glad Fay got rid of Don. also love the format. the whole movie ish thing. |
| Jarf 2005-07-08 ch 21, | abuseSimply: Making a movie of this would be an excellent idea. |
| nothing really 2005-07-07 ch 16, anon. | abuseit's good but lacks detail. This seems like only slightly fleshed out outline. It needs deatil in a major way. |
| avidelecteur 2004-11-30 ch 21, | abuseThat was so sweet! A little predictable, but quite nice and sweet nonetheless. Very good! |
| Naomi Schemer 2004-08-02 ch 21, | abusethis story is adorable, and it actually got a happy ending (yup, im a sucker for those). he's dad is a jackass, don is just a plane **, and well, i really liked bobby and chritian. great plot, radable, and nice idea of making it out as a text for a movie. -Naomi |
| Liebe Sasa 2004-03-05 ch 1, | abuse... Just occured to me, I read your least favorite work first. Go figure. As I said though, I still quite like it, for being in script format. ~Sasa |
| Liebe Sasa 2004-03-05 ch 21, | abuseThat was bloody gorgious. I usually don't enjoy reading script formatted work (though you wouldn't know it from how involved I am in drama), but this was actually really nice. I'd like to see it if it were ever filmed. Beautiful story line and characters. Mah-velous, dahling. ~grin~ Oh, and thanks for reviewing my work. Vulgarity, it was I believe. It's much appreciated, though I suppose I should warn you now that I'm not sure when I'm going to continue with that particular story. It's not exactly my favorite of the ones I've started. Peace, luv, and bulletproof marshmallows. ~Sasa |
| Shadow 3013 2004-01-09 ch 21, | abuseYay, no more Don! Yay, happy ending! Yay, *awesome* ending picture! But... But... The story's over now... :sniffles: And I shall never see it performed on video, by real actors... :sobs: If ever you get this on tape, you must tell me, and I shall buy copy after copy after copy. No, really. I'd buy a tape. You. Are. Awesome. And... I want to go write something play-like now. |
| Shadow 3013 2004-01-09 ch 20, | abusePoor Christian. :sniffles: |
| Shadow 3013 2004-01-09 ch 19, | abuseFavorite line: Bobby: A CHARITY CASE? Excuse me, I love you, I didn’t give you Top Ramen in a food drive. Don’t be hardheaded, Christian. :dies laughing: I'm sorry. I *know* this is a serious chapter, and it really did have me tearing up several times, but... That line, is just so *funny*... :giggles some more: Sorry. Awesome chapter, though. *Great* emotions all around, and I still can't get over loving your dialogue. |
| Shadow 3013 2004-01-09 ch 18, | abuse:sighs happily: Those three are adorable at the end. Good family. Good. ... Stupid Don. |
| Shadow 3013 2004-01-09 ch 17, | abuse:growls: Evil lady. Leave me Christian *alone*! |