This poem's great too, though I liked "You Are Throwing Quantum Physics" better. I'm not creative or intelligent enough to offer you constructive criticism, so all I can say is goof job. You're going on my favorite authors list. -

Lovely language. You have an unusual way of thinking which is illustrated wonderfully in your work and makes for a refreshing read.

'... small red birds with their windy intent'

billy the

mythology man -

does he wear a black mask as well?

maybe he exists

only to tell high school

students about the

cardinals and how they are

titans.

maybe he doesn't drive at all,

there's no tire in the back,

and he wasn't at the supermarket last evening;

maybe he's just another black-masked cardinal,

another titan with

windy intents.

EG

*does cutesy lip tremble thing*

wah

you make me want to cry. *hides minimal writing ability far far away*