perfect ending :)

great!

I liked the atmosphere of the story-coming into the middle of the situation, rather than seeing the beginning. Cute snapshot! :)

Cliche but cute

Aww..so cute!

xx

-sighs happily- This was so, so, so sweet. I really liked it.

Favorited! _

Great job... Kind of reminds me of 'the Notebook', with all the rain. Again, very slick dude.

- Signed as J.

This story is very well-written; it leads me to hope that they ended up together and not separated after this kiss, unlike the last one.

omg although this is a really good one-shot it would be a terrific story *HINT HINT!* please continue to write this story plz- dont you want us to be happy:(

continue writing please!

soo soo sweet!

Poohba,
Although this chapter stands well on its own, you MUST continue this story! It is absolutely fantastic! There's just something about best friends falling in love that makes me tingly. Mel and Josh are amazing characters. I'm curious to see just what will happen with them - will they jeopardize their friendship in order to explore something more? It's a big risk, considering their hesitancy and tension after their first kiss.
Update soon! :D
Liz

Is that it? I mean, are you gonna carry on, coz that would be great if you did! I liked this story anyway, just thought you'd like to know that.
Toodles.

I love that story. YOu have to upload more like it.

I love that story. YOu have to upload more like it.