I've been enjoying the deliberate pacing of this story very much. But I'm sure we haven't heard the last of Thomas Collier. Good work.

A murder mystery, my favorite! Don't ask why because I don't know why. This is one of the best I've read in a long time!

This is getting better and better! I can't wait to see how this turns out!

Getting mysterious! This is a great story.

How is this a mystery? It really is a good story, I just don't see how it fits in the mystery section

Great chapter. I'm curious to see how it goes!

Great start! Can't wait to see what other trouble Collier might bring!