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| SilkedSarcasm 2008-03-10 ch 1,  | abuse^.^ I might just have to read this story cuz my name is Monica (: I'll be sure to let yeah know what I think XD |
| flights.of.fantasy 2006-01-18 ch 1, | abuseso disturbing.. but so beautiful. monica, is she a doll or a girl? she's a doll, right? beautiful.. obsession is really interesting. haunting and eerie but oh so beautiful... you're a realli fab writer. |
| tears from heaven 2005-09-17 ch 1, | abuseWow! I don't actuially know what to say, so brief and dark, but full of wonderful descriptions and an even more wonderful story line! p.s. we need the next installment of blazers and eyeshadow! |
| Coquina D 2004-01-10 ch 1, | abuseA truly inspiring tale, something that makes me want to write again. Your writing style and description is wonderful. Keep it up! |
| Lhunbeleth 2003-12-03 ch 1, | abuseholy crap! I love this! I'm a little sick in the head though (literally) and so...yeah...but anyway, I liked it. Keep on writin' all this groovyness. |
| Specularia 2003-10-03 ch 1, | abuse0-o That freaked me out but really great writing. |
| Chainlinks 2003-09-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was... wow. Breathtaking. |
| Drizzle 2003-08-03 ch 1, | abuse*shiver*. i'm scared 0.0; but great stuff. |
| Memory of Alessa 2003-07-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was definatley not what I expected from the summary. However, I absolutley loved it. After reading your stories, I get urges to draw scenes and pictures that stay in my mind...it's rare that I find a story that has such an impact, by the way. I love your writing style, too. |
| BelovedMoon 2003-07-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was really good! You are very talented at writing weird and creepy stories. It was such an excellent short story, great job! |
| Thuggins 2003-05-26 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, Stevi ... this is amazing. I adore your work. |
| Leslie Cho-Hellstone 2003-05-04 ch 1, | abuseIn some strange way this was one of the most beautiful stories I'm ever read. It has a haunting quality that makes you want to hold on even though you know that it'll only spiral downward and keep going. |
| Sarah 2003-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like the way you made me think it wa a girl and then I discovered that it was a doll he fell in love with, That came as a surprise. It is an interesting story. |
| Twilight Moon 2003-05-02 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is... Very, very good. In some ways it was the creepiest thing I've read in a long time, in others it was the most disgusting thing I've read. But those are both good things - I've never read ANYTHING described quite like Monica's initial entrance. And it was amazingly well done. It embodies everything you aren't supposed to like about her, and from the start, you hate the thing. It's weird, how well you pull it off, and I don't know if you even put much time into the description - but it's haunting, somehow. Anyway, from the start this is captivating, with an amazingly intriguing style and just the right amount of cynicism. I love it. Congrats. |