Absolutely tender and romantic, but I was a little fed up with the crying. Not a serious flaw though. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Well, this is pure angst and sap (break up and make up, like the title of the second chapter), but I won't pretend I didn't cry. ^^; I bet all the romantics flock to your stories like hummingbirds to nectar.

sad sad cute, sad sad cute, sad sad cute. I think there is a pattern going on here. :)

That was all so good!! I really liked that style of writing. I loved the emotion you put into it. At the beginning, you had me feeling sick. :) Keep writing

2nd person...interesting...
*pulls at beard while stroking white Siamese cat in lap*
Yes. It will do.

Aw
~too sleepy and mushy and whatnot to think of a better comment~
I quite like it. ^^ Adorable!
~Sasa

Wow. Stunning is all I can say. Loved it. Truly, really loved it. I'm becoming an addict on your stories.

I really enjoy reading the story when it's written with the POV of "you", so it's like I'm actually in the story

yay! i didn't expect there o be more of this, but it was a nice surprise that there was! fits in nicley with the first part too, i loved it.:)

-Travis.

I realised that I hadn't read this chapter either! I'm such an idiot! Anyway, I loved this chapter even more, so please continue this story! please, please, please? 'Cause it's very good, and the characters don't even have names! That's even more awesome, since it's original! Keep up the good work! ~Joey the Vampire Slayer

this is soo good, it makes me think that slashes don't have to be fluffy and still kick **,kehe

WOW!! Thats soo good! IM glad you added to it.

Great story :D

(Made me cry, but that is a good thing. ;))

This made me cry. Why must you do such things?!
Oh, but it was really sweet. I love it. Will there be more?

aww, that's cute :D nice happy ending, i really like this one too :D great addition ^^