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| Ofinterest 2007-04-22 ch 3,  | abuseAbsolutely tender and romantic, but I was a little fed up with the crying. Not a serious flaw though. Thanks for sharing your talent. |
| Lady E 2007-03-15 ch 3, | abuseWell, this is pure angst and sap (break up and make up, like the title of the second chapter), but I won't pretend I didn't cry. ^^; I bet all the romantics flock to your stories like hummingbirds to nectar. |
| Cybeleflame 2004-08-03 ch 3, | abusesad sad cute, sad sad cute, sad sad cute. I think there is a pattern going on here. :) |
| Stefen 2004-07-14 ch 3, | abuseThat was all so good!! I really liked that style of writing. I loved the emotion you put into it. At the beginning, you had me feeling sick. :) Keep writing |
| fonduehamster 2004-01-25 ch 1, | abuse2nd person...interesting... *pulls at beard while stroking white Siamese cat in lap* Yes. It will do. |
| Liebe Sasa 2004-01-10 ch 3, | abuseAw ~too sleepy and mushy and whatnot to think of a better comment~ I quite like it. ^^ Adorable! ~Sasa |
| Sheena 2004-01-04 ch 3, | abuseWow. Stunning is all I can say. Loved it. Truly, really loved it. I'm becoming an addict on your stories. |
| FamousOneLiners 2004-01-03 ch 3, | abuseI really enjoy reading the story when it's written with the POV of "you", so it's like I'm actually in the story |
| Lami 2003-09-06 ch 2, | abuseyay! i didn't expect there o be more of this, but it was a nice surprise that there was! fits in nicley with the first part too, i loved it.:) -Travis. |
| L.J. is LOST 2003-08-12 ch 2, | abuseI realised that I hadn't read this chapter either! I'm such an idiot! Anyway, I loved this chapter even more, so please continue this story! please, please, please? 'Cause it's very good, and the characters don't even have names! That's even more awesome, since it's original! Keep up the good work! ~Joey the Vampire Slayer |
| FamousOneLiners 2003-08-05 ch 2, | abusethis is soo good, it makes me think that slashes don't have to be fluffy and still kick **,kehe |
| Ulfr 2003-08-03 ch 2, | abuseWOW!! Thats soo good! IM glad you added to it. |
| er-128 2003-07-02 ch 2, | abuseGreat story :D (Made me cry, but that is a good thing. ;)) |
| underjoyed 2003-07-02 ch 2, | abuseThis made me cry. Why must you do such things?! Oh, but it was really sweet. I love it. Will there be more? |
| i-nv-u50 2003-07-01 ch 2, | abuseaww, that's cute :D nice happy ending, i really like this one too :D great addition ^^ |