Interesting poem, I like how the hanged man knows the answer but can't get anybody to get it right. It's very funny, especially because he is kind of like Prometheus an Olympian god who gave mortals fire, and was punished by having birds tear him open and eat his liver every day. However one mistake that I noticed is in the beginning where you say "Has your life ever depended
on something so insignificant that the tiniest mistake send you to the edge?" Send should be sent.

wonderful ending... its so great, i love it.

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lol! what a funny poem! i love it!

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I never thought of that!!
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Man I had to read that one twice to get it. god that's so original and so funny...that's going in my favorites.

It ok and funny! *cough sorta cough*

This is a really good one! It shows a lot if you think about it!