Love the story it’s very interesting and I hope you continue it soon and add more chapters good luck ^_^

Awesome!

hey chica,
just wanted to let you know im fine. tell everyone ill be on hopefully soon. i miss you all like crazy. lys.
Kira

WRITE MORE!! PLEASE! And Check out my story! YOU MUST WRITE MORE!

this is a really good story I think you should keep it going. I like it. You have potential. Well thanks for the story. Keep it up please. :)

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER, DOES A.J KNOW IRENIA FROM HER DREAM, CAN'T WAIT TO SEE MORE! UPDATE SOON!!

respected wishes, reviewed chpter...moving on to the nxt one now!
God this is good,
Slade

oH My God! HOLY SHIZBOT!I loved Ayan's personality. Sry review short, going to next part...yuyup

Hillo,
Slade had a extreme stupid moment. I DID NOT KNOW U HAD OTHER CHAPTERS POSTED! SORRY SORRY SORRY!
okay..sorry.
but for real, good job again! and haha, i liked the plot movement O_o..hehehe.
Btw, nice to see A.J. back,
Slade

bum bum bum. A.J. sounds zesty!! ( my word for incredably hot/yummy. ::sayas sarcasticly:: what will he do with irenia? love your story please write more soon!!
dont suffer from insanity, enjoy every minute of it.
~Pothe

I read all 4 chapters and it is great! I want more soon!
O and if you can , can you please read one of my stories.
Update soon!
-Destin Scar

it was a great story...kinda not my style though. lol but great none the less. Write more!

ur writing talent is...superb. You make it look easy to others and inspire them. Keep it up with this kind of writing, who knows how far you will reach...
your doting friend,
Slade

WoW, that is a good start, kepp going, this story had some MAJOR, potential. I want to read more. Please continue, after the 3rd chapter. Thank you.

this is really good. please write more soon.