Thank you for your review! You should continue this story! It's real good!

Ps- What is a word count? Please send me the answer through email! Thank you!

cool! ^_^ I suggest you keep to one tense when writing though. It sounded kinda awkward here and there. Ie: He knew he must wait until a full moon, or the sacrifice would not work. Instead, you could have put: He knew he had to wait until a full moon, or the sacrifice would not work. It was very descriptive and full of action. I liked it. Keep writing. That's the only way I know how to improve writing skills. ha ha. All right. Laters. ^_^ I hope there's more soon.

O... nice opening chapter!

Can't wait for the next! ^-^