Wow this is really good! I'm reading and nodding like Yeah yeah cuz its just one of those things that you just totaly can relate to and feel and yet it remains so abstract at the same time, a fine peice of work, I really liked the use of capitalization and italics and all that stuff, the whole thing is just great very very nice job.
Alice

It's like some fanatical ploy against your own mind, and I love it to no ends because it's more than once an experience of mine.
Gabby

Why do I get the feeling that you've been reading my diary. I'd insert a perky little "lol" here, but I'm really far too out of it to do so. This same thought has been going through my mind... Why is there hope. Why is it that even when your mind says that there is no hope, your heart finds cracks in your mind's argument. Yeah...sorry if I'm complaining or being annoying. Guess I just wanted to thank you for putting into words what my heart and my mind have been warring over for the past few months.

WOW. What can I say? You've expressed everything I'm feeling right now beautifully. This is extremely good. You'd better keep writing. Wonderful. ^_^

wow...well put into words, well put. i love this. i do hope you will continue, yes?? please?

^^; This story really hit close to home. I really love this and it's writen *very* well.

That was interesting! I liked it! Of course I like a lot of weird things, so maybe my vote in your favor doesn't much count... But it was really, I don't know, I guess it was a bit touching, or something like that... Good job!