this is officially confusing.

you'r a great writer!! If you publish a book itrw I'll buy every copy i can get ahold of. Remeber to put in the words of all your scentences though. Anyway YOU MUST MAKE MORE!

kol...srry i haven't revewed in a while...but i'm revewin now so yeah..update son!

hi, great story. I've got the first two chapters under my belt. I'll read more soon.
Just a few things to say though. I was confused at what time this story was set in until you mentioned sneakers and jeans. So I assume it's set in modern day.
I'll read more soon, k?

Hm...so she is the girl for the card that was Hallow? Can't wait to see what happens next!

This isn't too bd it could use some more details though.Other then that pretty good.

This does not belong on this weak, little site! This should be a book!! Get it published so I can buy it!!

Great story! I hope you update it. I would love to see what happens!

-SAR

kool chappy..update soon!

awsome...the plot thickens... *evil music sounds in the backround* "oh ** wrong cd..were did i put that damn thing" *walks off 2 find whatever (yes..thank u i AM V-E-R-Y weird) :)

good little story u have, it was very interesting...hope there is another chapter.