 evm 2003-05-05 . chapter 1Another poem!This one sounded angry. Was it inspired by something, that happened to you, or was it just a random idea? Good as always, but there was one error. You worte 'thiworld' instead of 'this world'. I could tell what it was ment to be, so don't worry about fixing it. Thank you for reviewing 'Remember'! Great poem, keep posting, and I'll review!
-Amberose |