Argument huh? I see where this is going. Five bucks says that you were planing to make Michel a Yankee! Oh and then somewhere along, near the end you were planing to have the main character James shoot his son and then have a really emotional moment where Miuchel dies in his fathers arms and then end it, or something like that. A little predictable but I think you should continue writing it.

Wow. This story is very similar to a story that I wrote when I was in 4th grade. The plot is much the same, the title is exactly the same, and the name James was one I used for one of my main characters. EEk. That's kind of weird, but I like what you've done with it. Maybe you could continue it.

This has the makings for a good story. I'd like to see where you take it.

Wow! I really like what you've got here so far! I hope you continue! I have a story on here about the Civil War if you want to read it. It's not nearly as good as yours. Keep up the good work! ^_^

I like this story. I always like reading historical stories. I would definitely like to see this continued!