I myself personally am not a real big poetry fan, but, your poem is one of the best I read in a long time. 5 out of five dents ! The last 4 lines are the best, very, very, beautiful.

Keep writing !

Yeah, for a 9th grader, I'm definetly impressed with your writing talent.

Man! you are so good with ending lines. great, great! ur a wonderful writer. dont be ** urself!