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| E. Gao 2003-05-23 ch 1, | abuseO_O *squeal* [prints; runs into her closet of slashiness; reads until her eyes fall out of her head] that's how good it was. seriously. slash rules. (more historical slash! [pokes]) ~EG |
| aintawoman 2003-05-07 ch 1, | abuseI remember a much much earlier version of this... from way back in the days of ff.net. And I remember the names and the men and the cigarettes. (the only things really worth remembering in life too, I suppose. Heh.) I love it. I really do. And it has so much more meaning... a friend of mine... I don't know if the undertone was intentional, but it's so smart and painful... |
| Aviendha19 2003-05-04 ch 1, | abusea very well written story, structure and everything flow nicely and nothing wrong with it at all. youre a very good writer. i really liked it. who are billy and McNamara? the image of him being stone, being inhuman, is very powerful. your story is mushy and romantic, (: i enjoyed it. |
| Paradoxical Goddess 2003-05-04 ch 1, | abusei am halfway between sobbing and jaw-dropping. ah. "statues cannot smoke" ah. ah. ah. |
| leningrad 2003-05-04 ch 1, | abuseYour crazy. You must really enjoy writing, I wouldnt be able to type such things without it affecting my mind too much. K. |
| s-pannrada 2003-05-04 ch 1, | abuseWell - done. ^_^ |