really good, i like your work. However, i noticed some spelling errors...i feel dumb mentioning this...cause its poetry and could be intentional...so sorry if it is and i didnt catch on...Have a lovely day

"The extent of being alive

The same as dying "
LOVE THAT.
I LOVED this. You are beyond great. I loved it..It was so completely disturbing, it was just great.

Powerful piece. I could see music to it already.


~Heart of the Sword

Nice imagery and conveyance of emotion; I like the idea. You might want to run a spellcheck though.

Travis...good job dude...yeah and me and jordan thought wE were good...god damn i didnt know you had it in U! keep writin and ** wut ne one sayz bout U ur awsum!

Hardcore! Dude, travis, this is the best song you've written man...

keep up the good work

- C of D

Rather weird...but not bad! :)