Reviews for Deus Ex Machina - FictionPress.com

cooke 2004-04-05 ch 1,	dude, awsome. the writing is amazing, its almost poetic.
Jave Harron 2004-01-28 ch 1,	A nice story. Just wanted to let you know I started a story you might be interested in- http://w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1510694&chapter=1
Rudolph Schmidt 2003-12-09 ch 1,	That was an excellent story, the concept was great, so was the dialogue. I like how it was sort of mysterious with the Synthid's beliefs of the Father and such. I enjoyed it very much.
Rose 2003-08-12 ch 1,	dude, that is an awesome story. but it's one of those stories that frustrates me because you don't REALLY know what's going on. which i'm sure was the point. nicely done.
Creator of all Chaos 2003-06-26 ch 1,	We were meant to be extensions of god, to do his will. That is what father wants. Anyways, i thought it was wierd that you mentioned the premiedal soup instead of creation. It threw me off. Otherwise great story and thanks for reviewing mine. PS i researched what lilith is in mythology thanks a lot.
Hazel Bite 2003-05-14 ch 1,	Oh, i thoroughly enjoyed this one. There's much mystery behind it. I want to know more...